I actually really, really liked this story. Besides being well-written technically, I think you also did a fine job of giving the two spies unique personalities, which in turn led to a very interesting scenario. It's a given fact that mercenaries have a certain fearlessness when it comes to death, and respawn would make it even easier to consider dying more of an inconvenience than anything else. BLU Spy showed this very clearly in his actions and attitude; he expected to be lectured, killed, and go about his day in peace. This is where you really won me over, because RED Spy understood very well that to get his point across, he would have to surprise his counterpart by going beyond the extreme when delivering punishment. He gave him something that would stick in his mind and body even after respawning. What is even better for the readers is that we can feel he was justified in doing this, because the BLU Spy did need to be taught a lesson, and that he couldn't be allowed to keep doing as he pleased. I think that you did a commendable job with your OC Support, giving her just enough screen time for us to get a grasp of her character, but not so much that she started to steal the show. You struck just about the perfect balance with that, and I tip my hat to you. Thank you for sharing this story with us. 9/10, would read again.