That was fantastic. The dialogue seemed pretty much spot on. It was refreshing to read about a female character that isn't dead-set on winning someone's eternal love, or whatever. Just taking a couple of weeks to screw around, more or less. I also like how you illustrate her particular strength and sexuality with the term "she took him." I'm not sure that I've read many fanfics where the Sniper takes time just to hunt, either. They're few and far between. (I took a stab at one once, but it was relatively short, time-wise.) Very relaxing and refreshing. I'm looking forward to more of your work.