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1 .

I'll have to agree with Anon 2. You're probably sick and tired of writing stories about how Sniper and Spy get together, but this story more than just plunges in. I feel the reader needs a little more orientation, more background to flesh it out.

Although knowing what's coming, I already fell bad for Sniper and Spy.