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i fucking love this. i love heavy x medic, i love orgies, i love pyro, i love demo's "im awake... ah fuck it".
this is brilliant, please be my personal scribe

two things though : (typed with one hand, mind you)
"...Medic had latched onto to make a reality was finally about to happen."
actually cant remember why i quoted that, i think it came off as awkward?

also the phrase "old hat"
shouldnt be "hes old hat at sucking dick"
should be "for him, sucking dick is old hat"
old hat describes the action not the agent