"Dripping girlhood"? Jesus H. Kay-rist, this is the kind of stuff that stops me reading straight porn. IT'S HER VAGINA. Her pussy, her cunt, her snatch, her twat! We are writing goddamn porn here, you're allowed to be fucking vulgar! You're writing piss play! Why can't you bring yourself to use a good old-fashioned English word like "cunt"?