One thing I liked about this fic was the way you captured the two characters emotions. I was actually feeling sorry for the both of them by the end! Sniper, because he has to put up with Scout being a git, and Scout because Sniper's patience finally broke. Something you should consider in the future is perhaps getting the help of a beta. There were a lot of mistakes in here attributed to not proof reading enough, or just not having a clean pair of eyes look over your work before it's posted. The characterizations were well done, though the one thing that threw me off was Medic's concern for Sniper hurting Scout. Unless this is the motherly version of the Medic that a lot of people have come to characterize him as. Glad to see that you're asking for concrit, and hope that you'll take what you can from mine! Looking forward to the second part.