Oh yeah, good call on the smirk :) I'll edit that on my livejournal version, I wish I knew how to edit on this site. I know what you mean on the feet thing, it has bugged the hell out of me ever since I wrote it... I'm not sure how to reword it lol As for the Aussie accent, well I'm Australian so it looks like Australian to me lol But yeah, bring on the critique :) when it's friendly and well-intentioned like this, it's very very welcome. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment and help me improve!