You have a character that's supposed to be a hardass who turns into a mewling sex kitten as Sniper "tames" her, and that's insulting. It's insulting to me as a female, me as a reader, and me as a person. Which, if she had kicked his ass and made him her bitch, I felt like that would have been a better fic. I haven't read the fic, nor do I honestly care to, but reading these in the same comment just make me shake my head.