>>27 Sorry bout that. >>28 I wanted to make him as placid and blank as possible so that when he finally realises he's not just someone's piece of ass, it's jarring. Obviously I failed at that, and I'll have to work on it a bit better. Any crit is helpful, although I should point out I'm still new to actually writing TF2 stuff. (For an audience at least.) I'll just slink back to lurking for now.