Like before, I feel like the Scout's process of getting broken happened to quickly. I'm a big sucker for descriptions of being utterly helpless at the hands of a bunch of sick fucks, so you could have drawn out Scout's pet-ification process to at least twice what you have now and I'd still read it. And since this seems to be a continuation of the previous pet!Sniper 'fic, why would the Medic try to repeat what he did with the Sniper if the gunman's still around for perfectly compliant fucking? Let's see him do something different with the kid, or horribly murder the Sniper because he's outlived his usefulness, or turn the two captives against each other for the lulz.