Well, this is quite interesting. At first, some of the abrupt switches in the narrative's focus (like the switch from Chapter 4 to Chapter 5 - there didn't seem to be any kind of transition, nor any hint that Sniper was not the Spy's only interest (in-story, I mean, though I just remembered you noting that Sniper was one of Spy's love interests)) were kind of jarring, but I find it works out alright. I am intrigued and curious as to the nature of Spy's tattoos, among other things. Nice work!