If people are allowed to have "omg i just jizzed my pants and came buckets onto my walls" as honest responses then I am allowed to be just as honest in my responses. I don't know why you guys always assume I say things like this to just be an asshole or something. Being direct is just what comes easiest to me. I have no personal problems with anyone. My first post might have seemed barbed because I said "emo blathering nonsense", but for some reason everyone forgot that that's what *the creator themselves* called it when they posted it. I know it might appease your senses better if I phrase things all passive-aggressive and be like "oh maaaybe I don't know this miiight not be the best thing to post here...??????" but this is not how real people speak to each other and definitely not how criticism works. When I say "why is this in adult fanfiction?", that is a different sentence from "I don't think this should be in adult fanfiction." If I'm asking a question, that means I don't know the answer and I'm asking you why. People read into words over the internet to such silly extremes and it boggles my damn mind sometimes. A question is a question. Don't shove words in my mouth and call me an asshole for asking a question. And in direct response to you, specifically, TwoRefined: I never called this bad. I never said that this was subpar. I never called this below-some-sort-of-quality-you-apparently-think-I-hold-for-fanfiction. I restated what you called it, and said that I thought it didn't belong here. Never commented on the quality whatsoever. But because I'm not flowery in my language, everyone assumes I'm whining because I think it's bad. Which. I don't. Don't tell me to calm down when you're the one putting words in my mouth. Read my words for what they are, *not* whatever weirdo subtext you think I'm putting on it.