I love your writing but ever author has a few week points. One thing I noticed was how much you seem to /love/ the word beaming or beamed. 'Sniper beamed' 'Scout beamed'.. One other thing is how everyone devilishly/maliciously grins. I love your word choice over all but I think you may have used the word smiling and grinning a bit too much, if you are going to edit this here 3rd part keep in mind to change a grin to smirk or a smile to 'his lips curled' or something of the like. But anyways, I /loved/ this part and overall this whole story, I can't wait for the next part! :)