16 Thanks, that's what I was going for. I know a lot of transpeople and it helps to feel out Pyro's identity (in my opinion). 17 I understand what you're saying, and I agree to a certain point. This story isn't really meant to be just jack-off material, I was hoping to take it in a more cerebral direction than simply rape. 18 No, I agree. Heavy's excuse is complete bullshit. I'm actually really pissed about what he's doing. When I write, the story kind of writes itself if I have the characters developed to a certain point. Most of the individuals are to that point, but not all of them (like Scout, hence why he hasn't really played a part). 19 I'm really sorry if this is TMI, but I was raped (a long time ago) and one of them gave me the EXACT same excuse as Spy gave to Pyro. Truth can be stranger than fiction, friend.