Alright, so this is awesome because Scout isn't being a total jerk for once. I mean, don't get me wrong, I love Scout being the ass he is, it's hysterical. However, every once in a while you find a fic that keeps him both in-character and tolerably obnoxious. This fic is doing just that. Your changing of tense in the beginning threw me for a loop, kind of, but it wasn't difficult to look past that to enjoy the writing itself. I'm not especially fantastic at noticing grammar errs, nor do I consider myself a seasoned critic, but I really enjoyed this. I also liked it because you included the Dead Ringer. It's one of my least favorite weapons as it tends to be the one which kills me most in-game. I can't wait to read more.