I am intrigued, but i wish you had fleshed out the first chapter or prologue a bit more. You are just throwing us in here. The first part was not bad, rather liked the minial thing you had going on, but the second part has some pacing issues. Things are happening rather fast, with very little descrition. It worked in the first paragraph as it was mostly dialogue and a brief history of how the two got together. Doesn't work so well in the second part though.