>>181 Well, I'm sure Monster didn't mean it like that. Lately, the Chan has been a little bitchier than usual (hate to bring it up, but apparently, Yang got beat over the head with a lot of nasty comments, so there's that), and so it's got some members on edge, and seeing what are moderately innocent comments as veiled insults. Everyone just take it easy - I don't see anyone as a bad-guy, alright? >>182 Thanks, Japan! There's no harm done, and your question was something I meant to discuss as a post-note, anyways. I just forgot, because I'm a derphead. Thanks again for reading. >>183 ilu. (call me) >>184 My God, Banimal, I am such a fanspaz of yours; it means a lot to have you say you like my vomit o' text. Thankyousomuchsrsly >>185 Well, Spy kind of has him broken in one respect; he is... oh, wait. That's spoilers. DELETE ALL THE WORDS!!! And, yes. Trust issues everywhere. We'll see where it leads. >>186 Read my response to 181. Also, thanks for the crit. Ugh, I know I have a bit of a problem when it comes to leading my audience around by the hand like a child when it comes to intonation. Kind of a quirk of mine. I started doing this way back in the day when I noticed that my friends would always read my stories "wrong" when reading aloud. But since I've gotten a few other criticisms for doing it, I'll put serious effort into changing my ways. Even as much as I don't want to. One thing I won't change, though, is using allcaps for words I do emphasize, for the most part (Medic is an example for exceptions). Why not? Because it's tons easier, is why. I'm not manually putting italics in for all my dialogue - it's just too much work. If this were, say, a published book, then I'd obviously not do this, but it's the chan, and I ain't makin' no monies. So allcaps it is. >>187 Is it possible to italicize on the chan? Second-to-last update had an all-italics dream sequence I lol'd. Anon, u silly. >>188 >>189 >>190 >>191 >>192 You cannot imagine how awkward I felt when I first read all these. >>193 Yes. Yes, you may. Eventually. This next chapter is going to take a lot of thought. Love you guys, like, burning.