Now this is an interesting story! It made me realize spies make for good narrators - and you write this spy very well. I'm glad to see you touch on the fact that both snipers got a scar that day, though I can't really say why. I guess it's because the RED and BLU teams are pretty much clones in the actual game that makes for some emotional confusion when translated to fanon. For me. I enjoy your writing a lot and look forward to seeing your take on further characterizations and dialogue (though, about dialogues; sometimes, when there are more than two people talking, I don't know who says what. For instance, when Scout's just run off to tell the team about sniper's wound. I guess Engineer speaks the first line? Did soldier talk? He and medic argues together, so I guess he's there. Still, I like what you've done.)