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I like this idea. I suggest a few changes though. I would like it if Soldier had already befriended and lost the RED Demo, that way he's actually more awkward. He's already gotten over some of his racism but now he has that albatross hanging from his neck. Her reaction is "I don't give a shit. I'm not your new friend because you realized I'm black. BLU Demo didn't jump at being your friend because of that bullshit either! You were an idiot to make friends with a RED in the first place and it serves you right."

I would like a very awkwardly racist Engineer. As in, he knows he's racist and he's still our sweet Engie but sometimes it comes out without him meaning to, which is even worse. When he tries to amend himself, she doesn't want to hear it. He's kind of mad at her because he actually is trying but that doesn't change that it happens and it's uncomfortable when it does.

I would also love it if she doesn't automatically get along with the BLU Demo either. They're okay with each other but he's not American and he didn't deal with quite the same things that she did. They're buddies but they aren't automatically best friends because they're both black.

I'm cool with her ending up in bed with anyone, including the people I just mentioned. YEP. THAT FUCKING AWKWARD IS FINE WITH ME. DOESN'T NEED TO BE TRUE LOVE THOUGH I'D ALSO LIKE THAT. I kind of favor cross faction with RED Heavy or cross faction RED Spy though.

I think she should have become a Pyro because she loves the job (loves burning) but she also used to work as the Administrator's previous assistant. Becoming a Pyro isn't a downgrade but someone somewhere knows the truth about RED and BLU, because of leaked information, that can be tied back to her appearance (being black and a woman makes her distinctive if she happens to be in a corporate or other atypical-for-the time-setting) and being Pyro is kind of like witness protection as long as she's on the base and in her gear. If this knowledge goes beyond the bases, the "terrorists" (who are only trying to free the world from RED and BLU's domination) will win!

Also, I'd love it if she comes from Seattle. Not sure why. Also want either a full 'fro or maybe dreads.

I strongly vote for this but as much as I like it, I know I would probably fuck it up so I'd rather let someone else give it a try. I'm already writing too much as it is, as another excuse. |: