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I was craving for this:

"(...)Boy should not be hurt, should be loved.”
And them the large man jumped on the boy. Pyro didn't screamed, didn't said anything, didn't even look surprised or specially frightened. He should know. He thought; while Heavy pinned his small form against the squeaking table, a disturbing grin in his lips; that he inconsciously knew that it was a cruel trap, and a sign:
Do not trust.
"That's" Heavy grunted, while unceremoniously spreading Pyro's legs and adjusting himself between then, a hand looking for the syrup and butter on the pancakes "that's the love boy deserves".
Pyro could not stop the silent tears when the man pushed his massive erection inside his anus, and quickly started an violent and painful motion inside of him. Even though he knew.


I think it's much more...don't know the right word...degrating? Wrong? Terrible? If he start to really trust a man who raped him, and that very man act like he did nothing wrong. The excuse that he loved the person who ordered him to rape is horrible... i know the fic is yours, and it's just fiction, porn and stuff. But it's my opinion that the direction it's taking is kinda killing the mood (of the non-con porn POV, hehe), and it's more disturbing then if Pyro was just assaulted every 10 seconds.

Please, have in mind i don't want to be disrespectful, it's just my opinion...