Thank you all for your kind and not so kind reviews. First of all, no, English is not my native language, sorry if misspelling and grammatical errors bothered and made your life miserable. I'm writing according to my native language grammar. I don't think I should know THAT much into English. Not saying it's useless to learn, but still, condemning me because I don't know proper grammar/only learnt the basic of English at school... At least I spell words correctly. (I think so). Second, since I don't live anywhere near USA/Canada/England or other countries who speak English and I don't read fiction books in English, I didn't know you used " instead of - I'm used to read and I don't think it's wrong or confusing for you to throw a fit about it. "He's popular, well liked, and yet he picks Heavy. Heavy has been characterized as an idiot-child, clumsy and incapable of doing anything." Heavy is not incapable of doing anything, just because he's clumsy and an air head it doesn't mean he's really stupid. You are being really harsh over this. Why can't you like someone clumsy? I think it's adorable. "You've shoved us into the modern era with cellphones (Heavy has no problems texting, with his oversized hands and clumsy intelligence?)" Oh gee, I forgot TF2 was in the 50's right? With Spy's watch that can turn him invisible and the Engineer building machines capable of doing teleportation, I wonder why they weren't so advanced at the time to build cellphones /sarcasm. In the end, this is AU, why should I follow canon? And since they are in human form, I don't get why Heavy fingers would be deformed. To the other anons who kindly gave me more guidelines to follow and tried to help me, thank you. I really appreciated it. I wanted to do a fun fic for all to read, but I guess if I wasn't educated since little to learn English, I can't have that privilege.