>>14 Whut. I'm not grieving anything here, Anon. I just said welp, okay, sorry I didn't knock this one out of the park. Thought I could get away with no lube, but the consensus clearly says otherwise. Do you seriously draw the conclusion that I'm heartbroken just because I accepted some criticism and apologised for a mistake? Anyway - okay, you say it's not a big deal, but if you're the same anon as >>8 then it looks like it is a big deal to you. If a reader thinks something in my stories is wrong AND a big deal, then I take it seriously. Doubly so if more than one person says the same thing. I don't say shit like 'don't like don't read' or 'it's just porn, get over it' (no offence, Masonjar). There will be no continuation because I just don't have the time. Once I post a story, I have a policy of never editing it again - it stands as is, for better or worse, along with whatever commentary I get on it. Like I said - back to the drawing board I go. I have to figure out what I'm doing with the SOTD story.