You're a strong writer. You keep continuing, even if people throw their laughable critique at you (honestly, no-one is really assuming this fiction to be better even if you'd study surgery for five years). That is very admirable and so is your style of writing. The reader feels the pain Pyro goes through and that's something you can be proud of. This fic is dark, something you don't meet too often. Please continue soon, I'm looking forward to see where this is going.