Yay, drugs! Drugs are awesome. This fic is awesome. My main complaint, if any, would have to be that Medic's accent is written rather too thick. I personally hate it when people write accents at all, but if you have to, make the accent very occasional. For example, "I’ll admit you haff some flaws, now zhat I am getting a closer look at you...but nozhing too major". Perhaps change that to something along the lines of "I'll admit you haff some flaws, now that I am getting a closer look at you...but nothing too major." Or "'Don't vhorry your head at zhis moment, mein Krake.'" Don't insert 'vh' or 'zh' anywhere-- the 'v' and 'z' is bad enough. Just put "Don't vorry your head at zis moment, mein Krake."