My three cents: 1) Pick a point of view and stick to it. Then give us a perspective switch later if that's what you want to do. 2) If BLU Spy not being cognizant to what's going on doesn't make sense to you, then change it! Have him catch on at some point and do some counter-counter-counter espionage. 3) Anal Sex Does Not Work That Way. So either make the other descriptors so hot we don't care, or give the proper anatomical details.