>>153 Thank you so much for the criticism, it is very much appreciated. As for the scene where Scout tells people, it's coming up. I just thought since everybody was keeping to themselves, he wouldn't have the chance to actually announce it out loud. Also, I had a huge debate with myself about who Scout should sleep with first. I chose Pyro because I wanted it to lead up to this odd threesome, while as with Sniper, I would much rather it be the two of them alone. But I can see how he came off as way too confident. Lastly. Please, be as nitpick-y as you want. It's very appreciated.