Since you plan on making two versions, a revised version and a continuation to this one, I suggest posting the revised one that begins from the start in /workshop/, and the continuation here regardless of the backlash. I believe it's been said that most of the people not interested in reading it are already stopping from here, assuming the final sentiment of >>144 holds up for many others. If things become uncivil, then the only one at fault is the instigator, and they will be punished appropriately. On the other hand, critique here will help you refine the parts you have in mind for the revised story later, when you come to them.