I just don't know how to take all this.. FIRST, I just want to say, English is not my native tongue, so yes there will be grammar error because I'm far from flawless, but at least I'm trying to work on it. SECONDLY, I'm still new and this was only my second fiction (to me fiction is not the same as reality though..) but somehow all these comments make me feel like I shouldn't write any more.. Sure it would be nice with constructive feedback, but all I see is people pointing out ALL the bad aspects, sure it must have been something good, no? At least a small thing.. if you only mention bad things it's not a good feedback and it will make the author feel bad. Usually feedbacks are like: you start with something good, then comes the worse part and then you end it with something good, to encourage the author to continue writing and help them get better. That's how it's done to be a good feedback. >>12 I'm still a newbie to this, and I'm still trying to get adjusted to all this. It's not easy to write in another language, and I tend to mix my native tongue grammar with the English, of course I do it unintentionally. I just wish my grammar was better, I really loved studying English and was the top of my class, but then when I was 14, we got a really bad teacher and the grammar went all messed up.. I really want to take a grammar course, but seeing as I don't have time nor money for it right now I just don't know..