>>9 Oh, do excuse us for having standards. Your non sequitur analogy about camp in pornography has convinced me that it would be best if everybody just condoned sexual violence in pornography as well. >>12 The lube thing was a bit jarring, but it wasn't enough to destroy the story for me, and I don't see any comments saying that it destroyed the story for them. In fact, half of the people talking about the lube were also asking for more. If you weren't too busy publicly grieving the death of your story just because people pointed out a mistake, you could fix the problem with about five minutes of editing. Or you could just make a note not to do it again. It's really not a big deal.