Red, I remember you said that English is not your native language. I concur with the majority that it shows through this. Not to say it's bad. It just has more grammatical/spelling errors. The premise is funny. I have skim read this to actually find what it was about. It may not be realistic, but it would be damn funny. And that, to me, is good. It made me chuckle. It needs a lot of tidy up to make it easier to read. And as such, I find it is not just ready for publishing - which is what I see this forum as. Keep working on it - you'll get there!