Okay, I'm intrigued. Keep goin'. I have a series of critiques about the medical minutiae, but my own stories have been criticized for being too medically specific, and therefore obscure. Take it with a grain of salt, is what I'm saying. Sepsis would have been less likely to kill the Drei-Hund than immune rejection, for instance, and it's not the blood type that Medic has to worry about so much as the tissue type. Since I know *way* too much about this kind of thing (and am apt to be the only person who even notices these inconsistencies) do feel free to consult me if you have any medical questions. Really, though, Anon^2's advice about avoiding redundant words is probably more useful long-term. Captcha: Cbb apploaf. Soon, you will be able to download an iPhone app that makes you a meatloaf.