>>9 Not bad for straight out porn, but I think there are a few things that negatively affected it. NOES, I HAVE FAILED YOU ALL *slits wrists* Ahem. Those are some good points. I'll keep the angst whatsit in mind, I must work on that. And this whole thing was getting far too long - possibly I should have built it up a bit more, turned it into a proper multi-part story. Welp - too late, it's posted now, for better or worse. Once it goes up here, I make no other changes except to fix typos. On to the next story or whatever.