>>108 >>109 Hello Mimi, and welcome back. I thought about including overt anger in that chapter, and came to the conclusion that Angel would not necessarily identify or acknowledge it as such. In fact, the ingrained self preservation instinct that has her depending on the classes would prevent her from turning her anger on them. The only legitimate target therefore would be herself. With regard to the 'crushes' on futureAngel, I thought it would be a natural reaction to having a novel, reasonably attractive, personable female appearing on the scene. After all, the classes had been essentially cloistered in an all male setting for who knows how long. FutureAngel would most likely have been around for weeks only; if she had been around for longer (like a period of months, say), the male flocking behaviour would have faded well away. As for the body part creepiness, I thought that it would be self evident that the lack of scarring on her breasts would indicate that Medic had refrained from altering them. Everything else is scarred due to his surgical intervention. Also, I hoped for it to further underline his objectification of her; when turning her into a service toy for his teammates, it would seem logical to emphasise the obvious secondary sexual characteristics. Do you have a blog anywhere out there, Mimi? I'm Justamus on Tumbl r.