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No. 6266
>>6261
I have two bits of critique for this pic. First, that Pyro's lower suit seems a tad too wrinkly looking; they're wearing a heavy rubber suit, so their wouldn't be so many small, fine wrinkles, if that makes sense. The suit could also use smoother shading as the suit type doesn't seem to have much texture.
Secondly, the overall shading isn't done in such a way that suggests light is coming from the bonfire/fire crackers. For example, the wall to the Pyro's left seems to be cast in shadow where the firecracker should be casting light on it, while seeming to be lit up just around the corner. A similar problem with shading is also present in Demoman and Pyro themselves; the sides of them that are facing us should be shaded, as the light source is behind them in respect to us.
All and all, though, I think this picture's very good, especially in the lineart and overall texturing. Honestly, until I looked more closely, I thought you had lifted the background from the game itself, haha. Keep up the good work, man! Just remember to keep an eye on where light and shadows should fall.
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